I have given each of you feedback on the first draft of your essay, if you submitted a draft. Please go to the submission dropbox and carefully read the feedback I left you. Please note that I left detailed notes in the comment bubbles of your essay draft. If you pull up the essay from the submission dropbox and press each little comment bubble, it expands, and you can read what feedback I wrote out for you and what I suggested you revise. 

A couple of notes: 

Your final essay grade WILL be impacted by whether or not you revised the first draft and took into account the feedback and suggestions I left for you in the first draft. So please make sure to thoroughly revise.  please see the document for original essay and all comments, if you cannot see them let me know