The assignment describes European Spine Journal. Also, there is an Analysis of The Prevalence of rod Fracture. So, explain, at least theoretically, what you reached a different conclusion.

European Spine Journal – The Prevalence of rod Fracture Analysis

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Introduction: very poor, out of focus, more like history than introduction to the problem this manuscript is dealing with. It should be concise. Describing what known about this problem and what unknown that made you think of doing this research. Don’t talk about the history Research Question must be clear formulated Less than 1 page Aim of work. Clear Methods a bit disorganized and lacks some important information. Must mention that we obtained an ethical review board approval and its relevant number. The writing language also not good enough for the European Spine Journal and needs a lot of editing. Type of cage (4 Web titanium Cage ) and its criteria that may served to better results e.g good biomechanics, good lordosis, titanium material of cage , big footprints:

European Spine Journal – The Prevalence of rod Fracture Analysis

It was modifed PLIF (with 2 cages inserted bilaterally and with bilateral facetectomy ie with removal facet joints Additionally, you mentioned no details about doing the ALIFs. must mention it was minimally invasive ALIF with usage of Synframe special retractor. must mention that the posterior surgery done first and then patient was rotated and ALIF done. in some cases these werde done at same surgical settings. in other cases this was done in 2nd separate surgical setting. How many average days in between? who decided on doing PLIF or ALIF? must mention it was according to According to surgeon preference and experience Results:

European Spine Journal – The Prevalence of rod Fracture Analysis

How long was the follow up duration? at least 24 Months (minimum / maximum / mean). You mentioned nothing about this. You Must Mention that u excluded patients less than 2 years follow up and those who died ie 3 cases and those with incomplete xrays /CT . Agwad etal and Lenke paper read very good. because this the most relevant to us.but they have differrent results. Our argument for our different result should be a different and therefore better type of ALIF Cage ie 4 WEB cage Discussion is very poor. if you believe and your results support the use of ALIF instead of PLIF, you should bring every argument and document from the literature to support your results. You can not also ignore that a quite similar but significantly larger series (Adogwa et al, 2019) had a contradictory conclusion;

European Spine Journal – The Prevalence of rod Fracture Analysis

“There no differences between groups in the prevalence of rod fracture or revision surgery, however. Both groups had low bilateral rod fracture prevalence and incidence rates. One technique not clearly superior to the other.” You have to explain, at least theoretically, what you reached a different conclusion. Limitations of the study: We must mention the Following was a must due to follow up of complication and radiologically evidences and mechanical complication 3.you have to recognize and report honestly on the limitations of this study. Also, you have to make it clear to the reader, what new information this work is adding to the available body of knowledge and what distinguishes your work from the others.

European Spine Journal – The Prevalence of rod Fracture Analysis

Unless the journal and the reviewers convinced that you are providing new information, they will just congratulate you for your work but reject to publish because of the lack of new information. Conclusion (especially that in the abstract) it has to be rewritten. It should be concise, focused on the conclusion you draw from your work, not from the literature.

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